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They Came From Beneath

Voices crying from the shadows,
broken whispers pouring out,
their rasping voices scratching
screaming, they want out.

Their ashes spread in a starless sky,
the moon glistening on pale remains,
a morbid lake sits quietly content
its shores splattered with blood stains.

It's your worst fears come to life,
they're creatures from the deep,
they came from childhood memories
that haunt you while you sleep.

The tears you shed are useless,
violently they rip you from your dreams,
they locked you away in their place
and now your the one who screams.



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sarah98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 7, 2013 at 4:09 pm
this kind of reminds me of an old irish vampire story i heard once. i love the whole concept!! great job!!!
 
cowgirl4everThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 27, 2013 at 8:07 pm
You did a good job of using imagery. I hope your okay<3
 
bree_breeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 3, 2013 at 12:55 pm
Totally fine :) and thanks for the imagery coment. Its creepy because its inspired by the norse legends of the dajin, the original geni.
 
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