They Came From Beneath

June 5, 2013
By bree_bree GOLD, Auburn, Kentucky
bree_bree GOLD, Auburn, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
mistakes are made to be learned from.


Voices crying from the shadows,
broken whispers pouring out,
their rasping voices scratching
screaming, they want out.

Their ashes spread in a starless sky,
the moon glistening on pale remains,
a morbid lake sits quietly content
its shores splattered with blood stains.

It's your worst fears come to life,
they're creatures from the deep,
they came from childhood memories
that haunt you while you sleep.

The tears you shed are useless,
violently they rip you from your dreams,
they locked you away in their place
and now your the one who screams.


The author's comments:
Anyone ever heard of the Norse legends of the dajin?

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sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 7 2013 at 4:09 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

this kind of reminds me of an old irish vampire story i heard once. i love the whole concept!! great job!!!

bree_bree GOLD said...
on Jul. 3 2013 at 12:55 pm
bree_bree GOLD, Auburn, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
mistakes are made to be learned from.

Totally fine :) and thanks for the imagery coment. Its creepy because its inspired by the norse legends of the dajin, the original geni.

on Jun. 27 2013 at 8:07 pm
Myvoice4change SILVER, Other, Other
9 articles 3 photos 167 comments

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"Everything will be ok in the end. If it's not okay, it's not the end."

You did a good job of using imagery. I hope your okay<3


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