Now do you see me?

September 15, 2008
By Lorena Marquez, Mesa, AZ

I saw you today.
Did you see me?
I stood from far,
Embracing your charm.
I said hi.
You turned away.
I saw you today.
Did you see me?
I loved you.
Of course you knew.
I saw you today.
Did you see me?
I can't stand you loving her,not me.
Please don't walk away.
Left alone.
I'm nothing without you.
I should've known this would never be.
I'm laying on your driveway, wrist cut.
Love drained in blood.
Lifeless.
I saw you today.
Now do you see me?


The author's comments:
Rejection shouldn't lead to this.

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on Sep. 20 2008 at 8:20 pm
Awesome poem, it seriously iz really gr8 .

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on Sep. 19 2008 at 1:46 am
this peom is the best poem ever !!


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