Miracle

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Miracle
I believe in you

Miracle
I dream about you

Miracle
I'll follow you

Miracle
I'll work for you

Cause miracle
I believe in you





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dule_91 said...
Jan. 23, 2009 at 8:19 pm
this is okay but not great i mean, you need to expand this because almost everyone can write something like this... definitely needs work
 
Meli_mel said...
Jan. 22, 2009 at 8:50 pm
I don't mean to be the downer, but this is sort of average. The subject is good but it could be expanded upon. Add feelings! Cite specific ambitions!
I wish you all the best in your dream to get published :)
 
Icyblue241 said...
Oct. 17, 2008 at 4:03 am
I like this poem. Its simple but inspirational. Thats really nice.
 
LindsayLew said...
Oct. 25, 2008 at 10:13 pm
Its okay. the poem has a great subject but could be much deeper.
 
catherine19384 said...
Sept. 30, 2008 at 9:22 pm
This is a really good poem! You have a talent :D
 
rwm323 said...
Sept. 30, 2008 at 4:38 pm
You're forever positive. Keep it up!
 
Callie36 said...
Sept. 30, 2008 at 12:39 am
Great poem Emily! You're amazing- I'm totally jealous of your skills! I agree with Babs, keep on writing and you'll fulfil your dreams!
 
miki33 said...
Sept. 28, 2008 at 11:42 pm
Thats a good poem emily. cool website
 
Babs18 said...
Sept. 28, 2008 at 9:20 pm
This poem is awesome! Especially since there is significant meaning behind it! Keep up writing, girl-- the more you do it the more talented you'll become! And i absolutely think you are going to be a world renowned writer one day. :)
 
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