September 14, 2008
By Emily Marsteller, NW Wash, DC, DC

I believe in you

I dream about you

I'll follow you

I'll work for you

Cause miracle
I believe in you

The author's comments:
I love poetry. I started writing poetry when I was 11 years old, and I never got tired of it. This poem was inspired by my ambitions to get published. I used to think that this would never happen, but I've decided to work for it because what good is a dream that I don't shoot for?

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This article has 9 comments.

dule_91 said...
on Jan. 23 2009 at 8:19 pm
this is okay but not great i mean, you need to expand this because almost everyone can write something like this... definitely needs work

Meli_mel said...
on Jan. 22 2009 at 8:50 pm
I don't mean to be the downer, but this is sort of average. The subject is good but it could be expanded upon. Add feelings! Cite specific ambitions!

I wish you all the best in your dream to get published :)

LindsayLew said...
on Oct. 25 2008 at 10:13 pm
Its okay. the poem has a great subject but could be much deeper.

Icyblue241 said...
on Oct. 17 2008 at 4:03 am
I like this poem. Its simple but inspirational. Thats really nice.

on Sep. 30 2008 at 9:22 pm
This is a really good poem! You have a talent :D

rwm323 said...
on Sep. 30 2008 at 4:38 pm
You're forever positive. Keep it up!

Callie36 said...
on Sep. 30 2008 at 12:39 am
Great poem Emily! You're amazing- I'm totally jealous of your skills! I agree with Babs, keep on writing and you'll fulfil your dreams!

miki33 said...
on Sep. 28 2008 at 11:42 pm
Thats a good poem emily. cool website

Babs18 said...
on Sep. 28 2008 at 9:20 pm
This poem is awesome! Especially since there is significant meaning behind it! Keep up writing, girl-- the more you do it the more talented you'll become! And i absolutely think you are going to be a world renowned writer one day. :)


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