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Sitting there on the sand watching the Sunset,
of two Suns,
in the water.

Dolphins jump over the horizon, and seagulls fly overhead.

The Sun colors the clouds Orange and Pink.

I Watch and Wonder how Mother Nature does it...

It's like a Beautiful Painting that you can't take your eyes off.

I watch the world catch Fire as the Sun gives it an orange glow.





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SilverDawn said...
Jul. 31, 2009 at 4:38 am
wow, i do love your poem. good descriptions but i think you maybe could've gone farther with this idea and make it more original and creative. however, the beauty is evident and it's great nonetheless (:
 
livinlifejenn said...
Jan. 28, 2009 at 4:53 pm
It WAS GOOD...jennier<3
 
Platypus67 said...
Sept. 26, 2008 at 12:06 am
Hey hey, i like it, its purty :) -ashley barney
 
banntay said...
Sept. 18, 2008 at 2:40 am
I could visualize this poem and can see that this young woman has the ability to 'write a picture'.
 
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