"A Last Moment of Love."

September 13, 2008
By Ashley Woods, Allendale, MI

Lying on my bed,
not knowing what to do.
When I cant seem to think of anything,
I always think of you.
When you made me laugh,
when you made me cry,
even when we said goodbye.
Even when we kissed,
even when we met,
thats something I'll never regret. When we were together,
we thought we'd last forever.
I guess we knew all along,
that our relationship wasnt very strong.
Keep knowing what you've known from the start,
that you'll always be in my heart.

The author's comments:
I was sitting in my room while my friend was in the bathroom. I decided to write poems that we more based on things that I have been through.

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on Sep. 16 2008 at 9:04 pm
This is great. I can actually feel what your feeling because you make it descriptive...although it's short, you make your feelings clear.


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