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A sunny day or a stormy night,

A happy hour or a gloomy week

On my back I lie down



And



DREAM!


What if I go out tonight?
Am I going to pass tomorrow’s math test?

Where will I be in 10 years?


What will I do?



And so,



I DREAM!


Each time, it gets bigger

Like a flower that was a bud yesterday,

But brightens the room today.
Different things each time, none are alike
Just like snowflakes in winter.



For this



I DREAM!

For those who stare at me like a maniac, now


“Are you crazy?”

“Dreams are for dweebs.

What a waist of time.”

All I have for you is



DREAM!!!





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Ama B. said...
Nov. 16, 2008 at 2:30 am
Your poem the way in which it waas broken was not like a typical poem. To be truthfull i was suprised in a neutral way, what your trying to get across is strong, but the method in which you are doing it is not getting the message across dtrong enough. I applaud you for your efforts, but you should try to get the same idea across perhaps in a different form. Instead of it being as bubbily as it is try to tone it down a notch so that it holds more depth and meaning. Good Job though, 6 out of ten!!... (more »)
 
~sera~ said...
Sept. 18, 2008 at 7:56 pm
its a really nice poem di!keep writting more!!gr8 job!!!
 
jj said...
Sept. 17, 2008 at 5:43 pm
Wonderful, keep writing great poems like this one!!!!
 
aha renita said...
Sept. 16, 2008 at 8:55 pm
great work kavya!!!!you caught me into your poem since i started reading it till the end.
 
aha said...
Sept. 16, 2008 at 8:46 pm
xtraordinary!!!! gud job!!! nice idea!!!
 
nymalu512 said...
Sept. 16, 2008 at 6:31 pm
it was a great poem
 
rebecca said...
Sept. 16, 2008 at 4:16 pm
i love this poem! dreaming isnt for dweebs!! : )
 
Me =) said...
Sept. 16, 2008 at 3:01 pm
beautiful very inspiring and just plain amazing i loved the mood created by the author and the vivid details that allow the imagery to come alive...perfect! just DREAM!
 
tiff said...
Sept. 16, 2008 at 4:07 am
wow.. that was really good... gr8 JOB!!!!
 
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