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I wish he would hit me.
I pray, that someday,
He'll leave me with scars,
Be the cause of my bleeding,
Of my painful cries.
I wish he would smack me,
Across the face,
Leave a bruise,
A swollen jaw.
I wish he would make me scream out in pain,
Beg for mercy.
I wish he would just hit me.

Because it would hurt less
Than his words.



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RadBZ said...
Jul. 7 at 10:07 am:
i like this as well. but i think you could elaborate more on the ending. like say or word the last line differently so that is doesnt sound as cliche. besides that i really like this poem!  
 
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Jul. 7 at 10:11 am :
thanks for the feedback, i appreciate it. :)
 
RadBZ replied...
Jul. 14 at 8:15 am :
No problem but by line i meant stanza. Sorry.
 
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