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Come hold my hand,
Its raining outside, we should wet our pride
Come hold these hands,
I might ask you something regarding love
Come take these fingers,
Its raining outside, this is the most romantic moment of our life
Did you ever picture? I would request . . . . . . .
Some fact proposing love in this tiring night
Just put behind what’ll happen tomorrow
Lets get dampen in this lovely rainy night
I am not asking you to come outside with me
I am hauling you with my muscular hands on the rain outside
Though I knew you wouldn’t deny, but didn’t make blissful?
I am your weakness, touching your tempting body



Like this rain tonight
Dance with me but there is no music
However the rain is singing to make a amorous night
Hey! Did you see its raining tonight



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WhenYouCantSleepAtNightThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 10, 2013 at 10:57 am:
Awh it's cute (: 
 
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RainForMe said...
Apr. 26, 2013 at 11:42 am:
Someone has Talent!!!
 
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abcxyz said...
Apr. 21, 2013 at 3:30 am:
Its fine..gud.
 
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UnknownEntity said...
Apr. 20, 2013 at 4:50 am:
Okay, firstly I apologise, I tend to be really critical so please take no offense. I mean maybe its because i hate love in general but I don't know... what i do know is your poem doesnt flow, It's like several seperate statements put in a paragraph... try using connective language to add the the fluency ... secondly, i hate to crush your hopes and dreams but this is unrealstic... once agajn sorry  
 
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Elisa39 said...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 11:08 am:
This poem is really nice. I think you did a great job! 
 
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MelodyPond445This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 2:07 am:
this is actually the best I have read in a while. I'm sure it will be put in the mag one day 
 
romanticpoet replied...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 2:09 am :
thanx ! ! !
 
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LiraDaeris said...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 2:06 am:
Aw this one is cute! I really like this one- simple beauty and almost innocent. Very cute again XD
 
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