The difference

September 6, 2008
By liltrinhle SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
liltrinhle SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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I'm sittin' here, right now
I'm thinking things over
It's gettin' late, but I don't really care
I look up the sky and look for a star
A wish came to mind, then I closed my eyes
I thought of you, I thought of us
I thought about how things could be
She does like you, I noticed that,
perhaps a lot, you feel the same.
But there's something that you must know
It's me that cares, and love you most
I'd tale a bullet for you, baby it's true
Now you know, there's a difference



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on Jun. 23 2011 at 9:40 pm
msoccerm345 SILVER, Grimes, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

i can so relate. my ex and i got in a huge fight at the begining of summer and now he has moved on and i miss him more than ever

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on Apr. 18 2011 at 7:17 pm
Trulie GOLD, Beltsville, Maryland
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^^ I agree.

on Feb. 24 2010 at 10:02 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

I agree!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful!!!

on Dec. 20 2009 at 7:48 pm
MeganAnne PLATINUM, Niskayuna, New York
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All my life I've looked at words as if I were seeing them for the first time. ~Ernest Hemingway

You...never mind. amazing. words can't describe.

on Aug. 12 2009 at 5:11 pm
unearthlyhaphazard GOLD, N/A, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"There are three rules for writing the novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are."~W. Somerset Maugham

The second-to-last line is just, wow.

on Jul. 15 2009 at 12:27 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I love this poem! Your a natural when it comes to writing! Keep writing, you'll probally be famous one day! <3

on Jul. 15 2009 at 2:06 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Hi! I really like this poem! Keep on writing, you are really great!

on Jul. 14 2009 at 9:20 pm
I loved that poem!! It is very creative


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