September 1, 2008
In a world consumed
With desire and wealth,
All will be doomed
To depression and death.

But in a mind obsessed
With an angel of sorts,
One will be blessed
When a friendship contorts.

So in a world deprived
Of gifts from above,
Two will arrive
At the gift of true love.

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poetsRus said...
Sept. 15, 2008 at 3:39 pm
This is a beautiful poem! So expressive and thoughtful! I enjoyed it! Would love to read more! Keep up the great work!
Mrs. M (8th grade) said...
Sept. 15, 2008 at 3:30 pm
Way to go Allison! What a beautiful poem.
iygehaszor said...
Sept. 14, 2008 at 3:22 am
That's SO amazing. I got goosebumpys. Great job Alli!
klonggoo said...
Sept. 11, 2008 at 11:04 pm
I think this poem is soo good. It doesn't sound like something a teenage would right. Allison should continue writing!!
peotrynut said...
Sept. 11, 2008 at 12:25 am
Allison, you are a great author. I loved your poetry. Please write more! I will check back to see more of what you write. You speak to my heart.
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