August 29, 2008
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I am slowly losing touch with this world
Anorexia has spread her wings
and taken flight
While I am soaring with her through the air,
Blinded by my own ignorance

What seems like a
Festival of colours slowly turns
into darkness.
Hurtled through the air,
I land in a world of grey

I have surely hit rock bottom
With no means of escape

The end is not near,
It is here.

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FireDancer said...
Jan. 20, 2009 at 10:37 pm
I like the wording, I think you have a very strong poem here.A good message.
julz-isawriter said...
Jan. 3, 2009 at 3:06 am
This is very beauitful. Love the imagery. Rate my peom and stories if you please. - Julia C. Quitman, TX
jackiew1914 said...
Dec. 22, 2008 at 12:06 am
i LOVE the poem...if anyone EVER tells you it's not good, tell them it's not good for insane people to be walking the streets because they would HAVE to be crazy not to like that poem. It's touching and true...keep writing 'cause it's great!
aiviloeyaj said...
Dec. 29, 2008 at 7:28 pm
This IS a great poem!
Caitee_BloodyPrincess said...
Oct. 19, 2008 at 5:22 pm
Wow, this poem is beautiful. I've noticed that sadder poems seem to be more beautiful. I love how you make people understand what you feel.
Oct. 6, 2008 at 1:26 am
i really like this it just is a really good way to put anorexia in perspective
Dushan said...
Sept. 15, 2008 at 11:07 pm
The poem is sad,but realistic and very well-described!!!
Good job!
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