Reminder

August 28, 2008
By
From dust to dawn
even when im gone
you are my mother
and are job is to protect eachother

so even though im not here
mommy, please dont fear
for i am in your hear telling you to be strong
and not do anything wrong

you are smart, you will pull though
because i have faith in you
you mean everything to me
and no matter what thats how it will always be

every night i pray for you
telling god to help you through
even though you have turnt to some wrong things
i beliven you, i trust you, i love you,and i will always be there for you





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Aliesha H said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 11:11 am
thanx everyone for your comments :) they all mean alot to me .
i should be posting more poetry soon .
hope you like em too.
 
FallingThisDay said...
Sept. 7, 2008 at 6:56 am
This poem is truly incredible. The emotion and strength behind the lines and letters shines through and speaks to the reader. Keep writing.
 
kassie said...
Sept. 3, 2008 at 10:41 pm
I loveeeeee this one !!!!!! :)(L)(L)(L)
 
joesupperstar said...
Sept. 3, 2008 at 12:10 am
this is the best poem that i have ever read in my inter life
 
fire said...
Sept. 2, 2008 at 12:22 am
i am going to vote for you
 
jesse099 said...
Sept. 1, 2008 at 9:46 pm
this poem was amazing it hits your really strong i know how she feels and it tells the people for people who have struggling parents to be strong and they have better things in life
 
sellors64 said...
Sept. 1, 2008 at 4:18 am
Aliesha, you have always had very artistic properties, this poem, proves my point even more. I am voting for you and i really, really hope that you can win this! Don't lose hope no matter what!
 
Pinknotonlythecoulor said...
Aug. 31, 2008 at 12:26 am
This poem is Totaly Amaizing! I hope it gets published!
 
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