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writing...

August 19, 2008
By Anonymous

My crayon glides across the page,
thoughts race
words flow
time moves
Quickly.

Every word, thought, revelation
Slides
through my mind into my hand
the words
the power
the thoughts
gone from my mind.

Peace in my head, quiet, still.

Time is frozen, the page is full...

My mind is Clear

The author's comments:
Hey, this isn't the first thing I've written, nor will it be the last but this is the first time I'm actually asking for the review. I'm asking you to tear it down or raise it up. Either way I want to know and I want to learn. I won't be offended and I'm eager to hear what you have to say.
kcascino

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