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When I think of my school,
while sitting on a stool,
I reflect that it wasn't very cool,
Why everyone was fool,
enough to go to school?

But the thought comes to mind,
And untimately I find,
that school is the place, I know,
where one starts to grow,
and one's life-stream starts to flow.

Why am I being so poetic,
with a mind scientific,
in my opinion, very scientific?
How wonderful is brain!
But it too can stain.

The brain can be stained,
if it isn't, to work, trained,
like a machine which belongs,
to someone, who doesn't use it for long.
So the mental disease will prolong.

Therefore, we go to school,
to change our minds from those of fools,
into minds of creative guys,
and gals; this we cannot buy,
even after thousands of try!

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Jade.I.Am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 24, 2013 at 2:39 pm
Though I liked this better than the other ultra-rhymey poem, I still think u need to vary word choice if u rhyme every line with the same sound....but anyways this one I actually loved the idea, it was very well thought out!
AbbaDabbaDoo said...
Apr. 12, 2013 at 7:49 am
A very nice and very true poem. You are now in my top ten favorite poets ever!
Swa.Swara.Vismaya said...
Apr. 12, 2013 at 4:37 am
Its a nice poem..for your first try and your other compositions show that you've grown.. but again you're a very good writer and i always read your work.. :D  
Sunny225LuvsHugs said...
Mar. 24, 2013 at 3:57 pm
i like this one it show the importance of going to school everyday............
HaiDer said...
Mar. 21, 2013 at 3:58 am
yOu are dOing a fab jOb Hamza .. kEep iT uP we aRe wiTh yEw bOi .. :)))
monkeymorgan said...
Mar. 17, 2013 at 2:21 pm
good peom a litle hard to fallow but good all the same
GLoveGG said...
Feb. 18, 2013 at 12:29 pm
I find that one interesting. One I might read again, and thoroughly figure out the meaning. I love poems like this.. where you dig deeper the more you read it.
Sparkle1pops This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 11:06 am
Cool! but I must admit I got a little confused in the last stanza.
Zeesquare said...
Feb. 15, 2013 at 4:30 pm
nice work man!
in.this.moment said...
Feb. 15, 2013 at 12:21 am
I like it! (: it's really nice..I  love your work
cookiemonster24 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 6:08 am
I love your work, I always have. Just keep writing like this. Really good.
EnnaGirl said...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 11:57 pm
so true! i love the rhyme!!
Yuani said...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 10:15 am
Haha I find this one comical about school. I like it its very original
loveshersheys said...
Jan. 15, 2013 at 10:14 am
It's a good poem. I like how you write =)
baileyanne said...
Jan. 14, 2013 at 2:53 pm
Nice use of the comparisons and adjectives... This was a very true and reliable poem haha!! Keep It Up :P
Kiry12 said...
Jan. 13, 2013 at 2:51 am
i really like thisXD
country-cutey said...
Jan. 12, 2013 at 12:14 pm
its very good i love ur poems alot
emma_sue_luvs_u said...
Jan. 12, 2013 at 11:59 am
i like the comparisons!
MonsterGirl2000 said...
Jan. 11, 2013 at 2:18 pm
i like it...
Kanupriya said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 7:46 am
it's very light....light topic light words...!...d rhyming cud still have been better! :)
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