Mushroom

By Sparkle1pops, Colorado Springs, CO

You grew a mushroom
I ate it
I am sorry
Now I’m dead
Have a nice life.
The day after I die
you discover a cure for
Amatoxin.
Nice

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Haden said...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 11:27 pm

GAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... HA!

Sparkle1pops replied...
Apr. 2, 2013 at 7:35 pm

lol.....ya

Hamzawaseem said...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 11:01 am

when i finished it, i was like O.o anyways, nice work!

Sparkle1pops replied...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 11:03 am

lol thanks

Rolledthestone said...
Jan. 13, 2013 at 1:29 pm

Very blunt but a good kind of bluntness. Direct and semi-humorous mixed with seriousness. Coo'

Sparkle1pops replied...
Jan. 14, 2013 at 10:28 am

ThanksI I personaly love this piece becasue of the mixed feelingsand bluntness. In my eyes that is what makes the poem.

In_Love_with_Writing said...
Jan. 6, 2013 at 9:28 pm

Wow, that was pretty blunt I guess. Nice. Can you comment and rate on some of mine?

Sparkle1pops replied...
Feb. 10, 2013 at 1:37 pm

Ya lol that's the point, I would be glad to.