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Mistreated

December 6, 2012
By 7_Ambitions GOLD, Bronx, New York
7_Ambitions GOLD, Bronx, New York
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Looks can be deceiving
Words can be misleading
Down the wrong path you were leading
This girl didn’t deserved to be mistreated
I told you that you weren’t the typical
I thought you were someone better
But little did I know you would be the one to leave my heart crippled
I thought we were strong enough to withstand the toughest weather
Silly me I should’ve know better
To think that I stood up for us
You were flying high,but you left me in the dust
I should’ve listened when they said nothing good comes to those who rush
If I had we wouldn’t be in this fuss
You used to take me with your actions
Got rid of any distractions
But now my heart you broke, infracted
Thought had leaving would impact
Well it didn’t I bet you didn’t expect that
Now we’re done Accept that.


The author's comments:
This piece is about a relationship that didn't quiete go as expected.

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on Apr. 15 2013 at 5:39 pm
bruisedmemories ELITE, Birdsboro, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"When you're young, you can fly, but we trip on clouds 'cause we get too high" -The Band Perry (Song: Don't Let Me Be Lonely)
"Cause no matter what, you'll never be alone" -Lady Antebellum (Song: Compass)

I loved this! The words were so perfectly rhymed and the words really spoke to the reader. Good job!

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Apr. 14 2013 at 8:05 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Aw, so sad! But I loved this poem, very descriptive and full of emotion :)

swat17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2013 at 6:30 pm
swat17 SILVER, Mineral, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 34 comments
I especially loved the beginning of this poem. The message is very relateable. Sorry that your relationship didn't work out, but know that you'll be stronger because of it!

on Apr. 3 2013 at 8:36 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

I absolutely love this! I am sorry that this happened and to say that this is so relatable. But, you turned something heart-breaking into a wonderful poem. Sometimes it just works out like that! Goooood job! Love the rythym in here and the word choices. You're great! Xx!