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Mistreated

Looks can be deceiving
Words can be misleading
Down the wrong path you were leading
This girl didn’t deserved to be mistreated
I told you that you weren’t the typical
I thought you were someone better
But little did I know you would be the one to leave my heart crippled
I thought we were strong enough to withstand the toughest weather
Silly me I should’ve know better
To think that I stood up for us
You were flying high,but you left me in the dust
I should’ve listened when they said nothing good comes to those who rush
If I had we wouldn’t be in this fuss
You used to take me with your actions
Got rid of any distractions
But now my heart you broke, infracted
Thought had leaving would impact
Well it didn’t I bet you didn’t expect that
Now we’re done Accept that.



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mrsmusicforlifeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 5:39 pm
I loved this! The words were so perfectly rhymed and the words really spoke to the reader. Good job!
 
Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 14, 2013 at 8:05 pm
Aw, so sad! But I loved this poem, very descriptive and full of emotion :)
 
swat17 said...
Apr. 14, 2013 at 6:30 pm
I especially loved the beginning of this poem. The message is very relateable. Sorry that your relationship didn't work out, but know that you'll be stronger because of it!
 
LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 8:36 pm
I absolutely love this! I am sorry that this happened and to say that this is so relatable. But, you turned something heart-breaking into a wonderful poem. Sometimes it just works out like that! Goooood job! Love the rythym in here and the word choices. You're great! Xx!
 
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