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November 16, 2012
By lilacboutique11 SILVER, Voorheesville, New York
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War battlefield
COMMANDER
disapointment
disillusioned
paralyzed
mocked
conciliating
intrenchments,
rarely
mobilization
CHIEF
logistical
clearly
strategist
tactics
initiative
pursue
freedom
reminiscence
of
wild onions

© Claire V., Lubbock, TX

The author's comments:
This is a found poem. This is about the COMMANDER from the losing side of a war and a CHIEF of the winning side. I put "reminiscence of wild onions" b/c that to me represented life, b/c in the battle field nothing grows, and when the soldiers return, then wild plants and stuff grow there.
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