Teardrops in the Rain

August 8, 2008
By KKforever. BRONZE, Ormond Beach, Florida
KKforever. BRONZE, Ormond Beach, Florida
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She cries in the rain so no one will see

Because thats the only place she can be all she wants to be

Then when she cries no one can tell

Because sometimes she can be as brakeable as a shell

But she wont let anyone else know

So she lives her life just like a show

She gives out fake smiles and pretends what she's not

All this time she's been faking but she never got caught

She plays out her fake words just like a song

but she knows that this song will not last very long

She is a very smart girl with lots of talent

But with all this talent comes something more

And just thinking about it makes her heart sore

So now she gives very little

Because people expect too much

But she only has one dream, yet soon it will be crushed

When no one looks she goes outside

But all she does is sit and cry

She may seem perfect to everyone else

But inside she's no different then you or I

The rain and her tears just become one

And the song that is her life will soon be sung

She watches herself as the tears hit the ground

They fall slowly without making a sound

This is a story of this poor little girl

She lives her life without a hope in the world

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This article has 6 comments.

on Dec. 2 2011 at 7:12 am
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

this is very well writen

kendahl<3 said...
on Mar. 1 2009 at 6:59 pm
daymnn chicka this is really good(:

on Nov. 14 2008 at 12:02 pm

shirley said...
on Aug. 21 2008 at 7:43 pm
Katelyn I think you have a lot of talent, keep up the good work. I loved it.

golywblr1 said...
on Aug. 20 2008 at 11:35 pm
I think that this a great poem .I think a lot of thought went in to writing it and this person should keep writing.

lbrig429 said...
on Aug. 20 2008 at 3:15 pm
I loved this poem!

It caught my eye because one of my poems is called "Teardrops"

and this poem really is amazing!

Keep writing!

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