She cries in the rain so no one will see
Because thats the only place she can be all she wants to be
Then when she cries no one can tell
Because sometimes she can be as brakeable as a shell
But she wont let anyone else know
So she lives her life just like a show
She gives out fake smiles and pretends what she's not
All this time she's been faking but she never got caught
She plays out her fake words just like a song
but she knows that this song will not last very long
She is a very smart girl with lots of talent
But with all this talent comes something more
And just thinking about it makes her heart sore
So now she gives very little
Because people expect too much
But she only has one dream, yet soon it will be crushed
When no one looks she goes outside
But all she does is sit and cry
She may seem perfect to everyone else
But inside she's no different then you or I
The rain and her tears just become one
And the song that is her life will soon be sung
She watches herself as the tears hit the ground
They fall slowly without making a sound
This is a story of this poor little girl
She lives her life without a hope in the world
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shirley said...
Aug. 21, 2008 at 7:43 pm:
Aug. 21, 2008 at 7:43 pm:
Katelyn I think you have a lot of talent, keep up the good work. I loved it.
golywblr1 said...
Aug. 20, 2008 at 11:35 pm:
Aug. 20, 2008 at 11:35 pm:
I think that this a great poem .I think a lot of thought went in to writing it and this person should keep writing.
lbrig429 said...
Aug. 20, 2008 at 3:15 pm:
Aug. 20, 2008 at 3:15 pm:
I loved this poem!
It caught my eye because one of my poems is called "Teardrops"
and this poem really is amazing!
Keep writing!













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