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Forever is Over

November 5, 2012
By BambyAvila SILVER, Lucena City, Other
BambyAvila SILVER, Lucena City, Other
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Life is like a roller coaster its cool, its shaky, its scary, but most of all its fun so just go enjoy it. Life is short so you gotta make every day feel like its forever and to just enjoy it while you can.


The day I met you feels like forever,
We loved each other last days of October.
You hold my hands as long as we're together,
And said that to leave me is never.
My love for you is always there,
How far you are, I still don't care,
Coz' all I know our hearts are made,
To merge a love that will never fade.
Behind this love I feel I can't forget,
The day you said "goodbye" and let regret,
Your promise of forever is now not well,
You broke my heart that hurts like hell.
I still remember those days of October,
When I had loved someone so tender,
But now I know, we can't never be together,
And it's time to forget coz' FOREVER IS OVER!


The author's comments:
This is all about how my 'puppy love' ended. A sort of a painful moments that made me stronger. Maybe it's too early to love at this age but for a teen like me, it's practical and usual. It's not that bad to fall in love but we must have limitations while falling in love. This poem is dedicated to the first boy that make me fall in love. Even though he hurtled me so painful, I still say thank you to him for letting me loved by a man like him.

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on Nov. 14 2012 at 6:28 am
BambyAvila SILVER, Lucena City, Other
8 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a roller coaster its cool, its shaky, its scary, but most of all its fun so just go enjoy it. Life is short so you gotta make every day feel like its forever and to just enjoy it while you can.

Thank You for replying :D sure I will check some of your works xD

on Nov. 12 2012 at 7:54 am
remember16 SILVER, WhiteLake, Michigan
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This is only a minor setback to a major comeback

good job! you should cheak otu some of my poetry