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Scars

November 3, 2012
By TimmyTiger GOLD, Somewhere, Indiana
TimmyTiger GOLD, Somewhere, Indiana
10 articles 1 photo 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's time to nut up, or shut up." - Woodey Harrelson "Zombieland"


Such lonely stories
Are told with a knife.
They start on perfect skin
And end with taking a life.

Such tragic paintings
Are crafted with a blade.
The bright scarlet lines
Become scars that never fade.

Such lively souls are ended
With an everlasting choice.
They all could be saved
If they only had a voice.


The author's comments:
This just came to me one night . . .

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DanielM SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2012 at 8:13 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

This is so good! I like your introduction it was eye catching and kept me intact from the beggining to the end. Great Job! Suggestions: Add some more imagery other than that great job!

on Nov. 23 2012 at 8:13 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

outstanding poem :)

on Nov. 23 2012 at 3:08 pm
SkylerMorningstar GOLD, Barrie, Other
13 articles 1 photo 47 comments
nice one timmy

on Nov. 11 2012 at 6:15 pm
Kat_Poetry BRONZE, Neenah, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"But without the dark, we would never see the stars"

This is so good. It can get such a strong message across using only a few words. I also really love the line "Such tragic paintings are crafted with a blade." Great job!

-Ash- SILVER said...
on Nov. 10 2012 at 10:45 pm
-Ash- SILVER, Redmond, Washington
7 articles 4 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
She wants to die. She wants to disappear, to be remembered no more. She wants so terribly to be forgotten, all her mistakes, all her failures, everything. Her name to be wiped free from all record of existence. Because is it really existing when you’ve got nothing to show for your life?

Amazing as always Timmy <3 I think that it is something that too many people can relate to.  Amazing (:

on Nov. 8 2012 at 11:33 am
King-of-Spades BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Reach for the Moon, even if you miss, you will land amoung the Stars."

I really love your passionate poem, it is exceedingly descriptive and I may be wrong (I unfortunately am more often than not) but it seems like you write from experience. Either way you are right, lonely stories are told with a knife. May life bring you better hands, King-Of-Spades

BigSexy BRONZE said...
on Nov. 7 2012 at 9:21 pm
BigSexy BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friends are like potatoes. When you eat them, they die.

I like the line "Such tragic paintings are crafted with a blade." because I have experience how a blade can cover a canvas with one's blood.


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