My Mind

August 3, 2008
By Itgel Jargalsaikhan, Jackson, NJ

You incoherent mind!
How vexed and cursed are you?
Every glitch in every phrase
Just strips the humble truth!

Immature and blunt!
And vulnerability.
The strong thoughts of your vivid mind
Powered by your weak!

The anger in your gut,
But the patience in your tone.
Bi-polar little scourge!
Just leave me the hell alone.

Perceptive, and imaginative
Tis true, I have to say.
However, I still loathe you.
Every other single day.

You incoherent mind!
Why can't you run my way...?

The author's comments:
Read this with an open-mind. Relate, if you wish. The anger, pain, contradiction, and sadness intertwined to perfectly sew my emotions with this poem.

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Dman said...
on Aug. 16 2008 at 6:23 am
Wow i dont know like half of these words but i love it lol


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