Someone New

October 17, 2012
By Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"We have nothing to fear, but Fear itself." -F.D.R.


I just want someone new,
My others are through.
They broke my heart,
It's torn apart.
Let my search be wide, but not long.
And I hopefully I will find her all along.
I jus want someone new,
My others are through.



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on Feb. 13 2013 at 9:25 pm
WriterWannaBe PLATINUM, Somers Point, New Jersey
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I gave this three stars because I wished there was more "flesh" to it. I like what you have and it's good. But why settle for good when you can have great? If you were thinking of expanding, I would maybe add a little back story as to who the "others" are. Other than that, I thought it was really relateable. I'm sure a lot of people have felt like this at one time or another. I know I have; thanks for capturing the feeling! Keep writing(=


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