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How the time does fly

My oh my how the time does fly
At first I saw you from the corner of my eye
My oh my how the time does fly
Soon we were on our honeymoon
Kissing cuddling and laughing the day away
My oh my how the time does fly
Then we had our first child
Complications occurred 
but now your alright
Looking at us from heaven
With your angel sight
My oh my how the time did fly




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Care_BtvsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 3, 2012 at 3:26 pm:
I really like this poem, it is short, but says alot. The wording is very good and has rhythm to it, Very nice. 4-5 stars
 
Angel8645This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 6, 2012 at 1:08 pm :
Thank you =) ill be sure to check out your work
 
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Angel8645This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 16, 2012 at 11:16 am:
Please rate and comment =]
 
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