Suicidal thoughts

August 1, 2008
By Richard Astudillo, New York, NY

To die alone in this lonely sorrow,
Don't wanna live until tomorrow.
Wanna see what lies ahead
In my wooden coffin I call a bed,
Be put away, for years to rot
At this Cemetary in my plot.
Tomb stone over, saying my name
Just when I died and whence I came.
Wanna leave this world that was gave.
Don't even want my name engraved,
Thrown to the side I wouldn't care.
Wanna leave this world, this isn't fair
Life oh life who really cares
Death is my friend and in his eyes I stare

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This article has 2 comments.

on Aug. 14 2008 at 5:15 pm
I totally understand how you feel. This poem is very deep.

(daydream) said...
on Aug. 13 2008 at 6:30 pm
i love how you wrote this...

the ending is so true nad so awesome...

the imagery is great too.

you're an awesome writer!


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