inside the pink room

September 13, 2012
By michelle matthews BRONZE, White Heath, Illinois
michelle matthews BRONZE, White Heath, Illinois
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The story is by Olivia Stein Stockbridge MA this story is about a girl who is desperate to fit in. And doesn’t like friends who break their promises. I have been in her shoes well sort of but I have been desperate to fit in but now I have found my own to fit in with.
I think the friends she had had a little in common with her but it seems like they can never be trusted. One of my questions is why doesn’t she have a dad? And the way she dealt with losing her friends is bad she should get better friends who treat her right I also like the way the wrights telling every ones point of view.

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