September 12, 2012
smile, heartbeat, loud
heartbeat, loud, nervous,
loud, nervous, close
nervous, close, guy
close, guy, thoughts
guy, thoughts, jumbled
thoughts, jumbled, trip
jumbled, trip, fall
trip, fall, embarrassed
fall, embarrassed, sigh

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Critique said...
Sept. 14, 2012 at 7:24 am
This is really awesome. It perfectly describes the reality of having a crush. 
WriterChick13 replied...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 4:36 pm
Thanks! I'm not usually more of a novelist than a poet, but this one I really liked. The amount of emotion poems can pass on, without the hundred words a book would use, is amazing.
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