Crush

September 12, 2012
By vivianthewriter BRONZE, Hialeah, Florida
vivianthewriter BRONZE, Hialeah, Florida
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smile, heartbeat, loud
heartbeat, loud, nervous,
loud, nervous, close
nervous, close, guy
close, guy, thoughts
guy, thoughts, jumbled
thoughts, jumbled, trip
jumbled, trip, fall
trip, fall, embarrassed
fall, embarrassed, sigh


The author's comments:
Well, I had a crush on this guy and I would end up feeling like a klutz around him. One time, a long time ago, I tripped and fell in front of everyone. That occasion was my inspiration for the piece.

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on Sep. 15 2012 at 4:36 pm
vivianthewriter BRONZE, Hialeah, Florida
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Thanks! I'm not usually more of a novelist than a poet, but this one I really liked. The amount of emotion poems can pass on, without the hundred words a book would use, is amazing.

on Sep. 14 2012 at 7:24 am
Critique BRONZE, Grand Ledge, Michigan
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This is really awesome. It perfectly describes the reality of having a crush. 


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