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My Amie

She was torn away
Her life was to short
She refused to stay
It was her final resort

She left me asking why
She never though of the price
I never got goodbye
Nothing to suffice

She runs through my mind
How could I have been so blind?
Forever she will be
My one, my only Amie

She chose to die
I am left to cry





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remzy_1123 said...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 9:52 am
this was so sad but sweet u got talent
 
AlmostNormal replied...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 5:52 pm
Thank you so much!
 
AlmostNormal said...
Sept. 10, 2012 at 5:20 pm
It was My girlfriend, i will most deff. check your out, Thanks for the comment!
 
stupendousman said...
Sept. 10, 2012 at 3:40 pm
I really like your poem; it has a lot of emotion. i'm not much of a poet, but might i suggest adding a little bit more literary devices. please rate and comment on my work! i would really appreciate it! :)
 
writer3499 said...
Sept. 10, 2012 at 3:20 pm
WOW thats really sad!  It's beautiful and I loved it and if this actually happened I am sooo sorry! It must be awful to be in your shoes...but if you wouldnt mind cheking out some of my work I would really appreciate it!
 
Snow-White-Queen replied...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 11:32 pm
This is really beautiful, in a sad, tragic way.
 
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