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I long for someone to love me,
someone to care for me,
someone to be there for me.

I do want to be loved by someone,
not just anyone,
but a hansome one.

Not the kind of good looking hansome,
more like the funny one,
nevermind if it's the ugly one.

I long for someone to cherish me,
someone to believe in me,
someone to make love to me.

All these years feeling so lonely,
pain growing so slowly,
not willing to be solitery.

But I must go on,
I must carry on,
I must move on.

This way,
my prince will come some day,
and will never go away.



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TheLostDoe said...
Dec. 3, 2012 at 7:16 pm
I loved it. Great job!
 
BlueSunset replied...
Dec. 6, 2012 at 6:05 am
Thank you! :-)
 
J1029This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 26, 2012 at 8:53 pm
I love this! You should write more poetry. Your good at it!
 
BlueSunset replied...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 6:01 pm
Wow, thanks J! Really appreciate it! I haven't been writing for a while but I think you've kind of helped me get back into it x thanks 
 
Lizzy31This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 7:58 am
i love this. and i wish your prince be the most handsome man on this  earth, not only  by looks but by his heart too.
 
BlueSunset said...
Oct. 2, 2012 at 3:19 am
Thank you so much! x
 
bagley777 said...
Oct. 1, 2012 at 10:15 pm
I just wrote something a bit similar to this. You did an amazing job(: I love the structure!
 
J1029This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 1, 2012 at 6:46 pm
I am completly in love with this poem! I can actually feel the emotion! 
 
BlueSunset replied...
Oct. 2, 2012 at 9:22 am
Thank you! x
 
IssaK said...
Oct. 1, 2012 at 4:06 pm
This is beautiful! Full of passion, I can tell! :)
 
BlueSunset replied...
Oct. 2, 2012 at 9:23 am
Thank you so much, much appreciated ;)  
 
BlueSunset said...
Oct. 1, 2012 at 10:37 am
thanks! that's really sweet of you x
 
Ruby-Paige-Rose said...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 8:05 am
It's like the Cinderella story, but so much bettter!
 
BlueSunset replied...
Oct. 2, 2012 at 9:25 am
oh thanks x <3
 
BlueSunset said...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 7:39 am
awww thanks :)
 
Atl.Braves03This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 6:33 pm
Your prince will come one day, don't worry!
 
BlueSunset replied...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 7:41 am
aww thanks :) x
 
ShannonLil99This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 9, 2012 at 9:56 am
Cool, it's really good. I love it! x
 
BlueSunset replied...
Sept. 10, 2012 at 2:22 am
Thanks Shannon! :D
 
AlaskanGirl15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 26, 2012 at 6:21 pm
AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING There are no other words to describe it!!
 
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