I Long To Be Loved

August 16, 2012
By BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss


I long for someone to love me,
someone to care for me,
someone to be there for me.

I do want to be loved by someone,
not just anyone,
but a hansome one.

Not the kind of good looking hansome,
more like the funny one,
nevermind if it's the ugly one.

I long for someone to cherish me,
someone to believe in me,
someone to make love to me.

All these years feeling so lonely,
pain growing so slowly,
not willing to be solitery.

But I must go on,
I must carry on,
I must move on.

This way,
my prince will come some day,
and will never go away.


The author's comments:
My first piece of poetry. I don't really write a lot of poetry, so don't be too harsh!

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on Dec. 6 2012 at 6:05 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Thank you! :-)

on Dec. 3 2012 at 7:16 pm
TheLostDoe GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
“She says nothing at all, but simply stares upward into the dark sky and watches, with sad eyes, the slow dance of the infinite stars.” - Neil Gaiman

I loved it. Great job!

on Nov. 28 2012 at 6:01 pm
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Wow, thanks J! Really appreciate it! I haven't been writing for a while but I think you've kind of helped me get back into it x thanks 

J1029 SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2012 at 8:53 pm
J1029 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Sing like no one is listening,
Dance like no one is watching,
Love like you've never been hurt and
Live like it's heaven on earth.

- Mark Twain

I love this! You should write more poetry. Your good at it!

Lizzy31 SILVER said...
on Oct. 15 2012 at 7:58 am
Lizzy31 SILVER, Lkow, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Everything that is beautiful is not always good but everything that is good is always beautiful

i love this. and i wish your prince be the most handsome man on this  earth, not only  by looks but by his heart too.

on Oct. 2 2012 at 9:25 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

oh thanks x <3

on Oct. 2 2012 at 9:23 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Thank you so much, much appreciated ;)  

on Oct. 2 2012 at 9:22 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Thank you! x

on Oct. 2 2012 at 3:19 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Thank you so much! x

bagley777 GOLD said...
on Oct. 1 2012 at 10:15 pm
bagley777 GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
11 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a two way street. If you find yourself on a one-way road, it's time to take the next turn off.

I just wrote something a bit similar to this. You did an amazing job(: I love the structure!

J1029 SILVER said...
on Oct. 1 2012 at 6:46 pm
J1029 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sing like no one is listening,
Dance like no one is watching,
Love like you've never been hurt and
Live like it's heaven on earth.

- Mark Twain

I am completly in love with this poem! I can actually feel the emotion! 

IssaK BRONZE said...
on Oct. 1 2012 at 4:06 pm
IssaK BRONZE, Farmington, Utah
3 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The reason people find it so hard to be happy is that they always see the past better than it was, the present worse than it is, and the future less resolved than it will be ."

This is beautiful! Full of passion, I can tell! :)

on Oct. 1 2012 at 10:37 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

thanks! that's really sweet of you x

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2012 at 8:05 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

It's like the Cinderella story, but so much bettter!

on Sep. 29 2012 at 7:41 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

aww thanks :) x

on Sep. 29 2012 at 7:39 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

awww thanks :)

on Sep. 27 2012 at 6:33 pm
Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
God is God and I am not
I can only see a part
Of this picture he's painting
God is God and I am man
I will never understand
Because only God is God

Your prince will come one day, don't worry!

on Sep. 10 2012 at 2:22 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Thanks Shannon! :D

on Sep. 9 2012 at 9:56 am
ShannonLil99 GOLD, Ongar, Other
10 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Why should I care what other people think of me? I am who I am. And who I wanna be.'


















- Avril Lavigne

Cool, it's really good. I love it! x

on Aug. 27 2012 at 5:54 pm
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Laska! Thank you so much! x




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