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Daisies torn from the ground.
He loves me, he loves me not.
Petals ripped from their stem.
He loves me, he loves me not.
Daisies captured by the dozen.
I love him, I love him not.
Petals plucked off silently, quickly.
I love him, I love him not.
Fields of daisies gone.
He loves me, he loves me not.
Petals in heaps.
He loves me, he loves me not.
Not a daisy in sight.
I love him, I love him not.
Petals drifting in the breeze.
I love him, I love him not.
Everything is gone.
He loves me, he loves me not.
Except my love for him,
The only daisy left in an empty field.
He loves me, he loves me
Not.



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HudaZaveryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 31 at 10:33 am
absolutely beautiful and genius poem, I love this!
 
so_joy replied...
Aug. 3 at 11:38 am
Thank you!
 
amber603This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 20, 2013 at 12:00 am
Beautiful symbolism of nature and of life's values in love. The old "he loves me, he lose me not" trick we use to come to a final answer. Awesome, love ur stuff:)
 
so_joy replied...
Apr. 9, 2013 at 9:38 am
Thank you!
 
1stclasspoetrylover said...
Mar. 19, 2013 at 2:18 pm
Really incredible!! I love how you use nature in your poem. That's what fascinates me very much! 
 
so_joy replied...
Apr. 9, 2013 at 9:37 am
Thank you!
 
In_Love_with_Writing said...
Dec. 27, 2012 at 11:35 am
You are really good and very talented. I'm impressed.
 
so_joy replied...
Jan. 1, 2013 at 5:23 pm
Thank you!
 
In_Love_with_Writing replied...
Jan. 1, 2013 at 7:51 pm
You're very welcome!
 
LaurenD. said...
Dec. 14, 2012 at 6:40 am
Great job! You are really talented and your poems are relatable. Thank you so much for commenting on my poem and continue writing!
 
so_joy replied...
Dec. 18, 2012 at 8:47 am
Thank you so much!
 
Padoodallee said...
Dec. 12, 2012 at 10:59 pm
Well I can't say anything that no one else has said about this... but it really is amazing =) I always wondered why people did that in the first place... flowers are too beautiful to destroy on a silly fancy whether he really does love you or not.
 
so_joy replied...
Dec. 13, 2012 at 9:23 am
Thank you!! I found this idea great material to write about
 
so_joy said...
Dec. 10, 2012 at 9:53 am
Thank you so much!
 
AlexanderQ said...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 9:46 pm
This sent chills down my spine. It's very haunting. I have to say this is also my favorite of yours. I can feel the emotions of the girl: enraged, furious, frustrated to know the truth, sadness, and just confused. Love it! :)
 
Ollieanne said...
Nov. 29, 2012 at 8:19 am
This is so cute:) love it:)
 
so_joy replied...
Nov. 29, 2012 at 11:35 am
Thanks! Do you mind checking out my other poem, Fishbowl?
 
guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 1:54 pm
Wow, this is my favorite by you. It was easy for me to picture it mentaly and understand your deeper meaning. 5 stars.
 
so_joy replied...
Nov. 29, 2012 at 11:32 am
Thank you so much!
 
ChobaniLuvinPenguin This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 27, 2012 at 9:06 pm
So beautiful and so creative! It is easy to understand in context, and the deeper meaning behind it really makes you think. You make it seem like there is a somewhat violent side in the plucking of the daisies, and create a character with the desperate voice of your narrator, which is very unique. I love it!!! Truly amazing.
 
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