I dreamed.....

I like this! Great job! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! It would mean a lot :) Thanks!

i've read all your poems and you write well, and i admire the words you use and your construction. however, i do not get the message you are trying you cnvey, both in this poem and tombstones. perhaps you should try writing with a better idea in mind, and briing out that message with the powerful writing skills you have, that would make a brilliantly explosive combination. keep going!