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Her Eyes

August 2, 2012
By wreckthistravesty GOLD, New Iberia, Louisiana
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wreckthistravesty GOLD, New Iberia, Louisiana
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Her eyes meet mine
A tears falls down her face
I inch one foot forward
Closing the space
Her eyes plead sadly,
Filled with hurt and despair
Though it's tearing me apart
I can't break the stare
Her eyes are glistening
with what might have been
she asks me why
and I can't even begin
Her eyes tell so much
Her whole heart on display
I'm enveloped in her emotions
Fear, Pain, and Dismay.
Her eyes still haunt me
Reminding me of what I created
And showing that I inflicted
What I've always claimed to have hated.

© Monica L., St. George, UT

The author's comments:
About two years ago I attempted suicide. Someone knew something was off and called my mom. My mom rushed home and this is about the scene when I first saw her.
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wreckthistravesty GOLD said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 4:30 pm
wreckthistravesty GOLD, New Iberia, Louisiana
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Don't give up because you're losing. You haven't lost.

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Thank you so much! This means alot!
DanielM SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 4:24 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

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Wow.... I'm speechless. I can relate to this because I have friends who were in your same situtation. Anyhow great emotion. Your a wonderful poet. Please keep writing.