July 29, 2012
growing each day
while peaks reach for the sky
Magestic, you hide behind clouds
and wait.

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221B. said...
Dec. 30, 2013 at 12:36 am
This is a very beautifully simple poem. Perfect for readers who can lose intrest easily. It's the simplictiy of this poem that makes it so extradinary. Now in days it's all about the complextiy in words, but really it's about the simple. This poem gives you something you can simply enjoy without thinking to hard about what it means. Wonderful job. 
ladybugsrock replied...
Dec. 31, 2013 at 4:28 pm
Thank you! and thanks for coming to check out some of my work! It means a lot!
DrkBluPrincess This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 23, 2012 at 9:35 pm
I really like it, its so simple and sweet and it gives such a nice visual!
ladybugsrock replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 11:13 am
Thank you so much! I have read some of your work as well and wow u r such a good writer! Please continue to read more of my work! Thanks again:)
McCauliflower said...
Sept. 9, 2012 at 2:05 pm
This is one of those simple writings that I absolutely love.
ladybugsrock replied...
Sept. 10, 2012 at 7:42 pm
aww thanks!!:) ur poems rock!!!
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