Love can be

July 29, 2008
By Shannona Lee, Queens, New York, NY

My breath is becoming heavy
For I can no longer breathe.
The thorns twisted
within my heart beats toward a new start.
Though I refuse to remove the thorn.

Even if it is a fading, radiant light;
I will to chase after it, just like the spica of the sky.
No matter what kind of shallow darkness binds me

Accept everything, no matter how
much blood,
The sacred dust of an angel's words
Remembering these certain memories,
The door of love, which will opened now.

The moon has falleen onto the thorns,
dancing from above.
My thoughts are incomplete
There was tender warmth when I was touched by your gentle smile.

There was truth in that profile,
I wanted you to unwrap my heart.
There is nothing left,
But words in engraved in my heart.

The author's comments:
Kyle W. inspired me.
I hope that when others read this,
they will understand, and finally realize to drop it.

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This article has 6 comments.

krysten said...
on Dec. 13 2008 at 6:36 pm
Wow, this is just...AWESOME. I love it. It reminds me of my first real boyfriend and all that came with our break up.

on Aug. 31 2008 at 5:20 am
wow Amazing! truly amazing...

Cassie said...
on Aug. 27 2008 at 11:45 pm
wow. reminds me of the first guy i ever thought i loved

Samrock6590 said...
on Aug. 11 2008 at 1:06 am

Butt Raper said...
on Aug. 10 2008 at 10:12 pm

taro-ftw said...
on Aug. 9 2008 at 2:41 pm
xD nice poem.

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