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My heart is like an open book
All you have to do is take a look
It shows the real me
Here I am for everyone to see

It beats soft and calm
It's the pulse near my palm
But sometimes it's locked
It keeps loved ones blocked

It sometimes is hostile
It keeps a distance of a mile
When I'm happy it poses
When I'm sad it closes

Even though I ponder
I never let my heart wander



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bigardThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 6, 2013 at 11:39 pm:
nice and simple!
 
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nakubaraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 22, 2012 at 5:59 pm:
Very nice! Good ryhming.
 
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megsloveslions said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 12:29 pm:
great job! loved the rhyming
 
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DanielM said...
Jul. 16, 2012 at 10:31 am:
Hey just me, I really liked this poem. Great job! I really like the part of my when im sad my heart closes. Great line. Suggestion: maybe add more imagery
 
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