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I feel like nothing's right
I have gone through all the fight.

Something makes me feel inside
A strange thing I can't desrcribe.

It's been so long you had left.
I haven't seen your face since that day.

I thought you would fade
And then you came to bid me the last wave.

And I know not what to say
Maybe the pain lowered on it's way.
Nothing made me cry that day.

I thought i succeeded,
And the pain is no more needed.

But it proved me wrong once again.
Thoughts creeped into my brain.

Flashbacks within a closed eye
Of the day you said 'goodbye'

Couldn't make out what was happening the other side
Sinking myself deep inside.

Felt myself cold and dry
And suddenly I started to cry.

I made myself go through
All the things I could do.

All the life's depths and bends
Maybe it never ends.

One day I'll rise
And forget all the cries.

Only if I have the faith
Till the one last breath.




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claryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 26, 2013 at 11:43 am:
I like it, as a tells a story it rhythms the words. I never seen that. It's good.
 
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ZeesrockThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 19, 2012 at 10:17 pm:
Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it and the rhyming made it all the better.
 
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writer3499 said...
Aug. 6, 2012 at 9:42 pm:
This is a really great peom!! I loved how it ryhmed as you told the story. Would you mind giving me feenack on my work?
 
pratsjb replied...
Aug. 7, 2012 at 11:11 pm :
thanks. in which work do you want my feedback?
 
writer3499 replied...
Aug. 10, 2012 at 6:59 pm :
Your welcome and whatever peices you would like to comment on! I need tips on all of my perices haha.  But I would love to have you comment/rate on "Perfect"  
 
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Tam2019 said...
Jul. 7, 2012 at 3:58 am:
an amazing depiction of being lonely...nd terrorised..in Love..i felt it..by d Heart..!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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