The Rotary Devil:

June 29, 2012
By Happymask PLATINUM, Pride, Louisiana
Happymask PLATINUM, Pride, Louisiana
22 articles 3 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have great faith in fools, self-confidence my friends call it." - Edgar Allan Poe


My radiant light composed of four
And twirling blades of single more
Can end one where they lay
From up above in broad of day
Only held by metal wire
And thick cement that might give way
My every shake revealing
Of evil plot deceiving
To one day strike and fan away

I may be old or may be new
I may be loud as danger brew
Long are the years I wait
And every day's my pending date
When left unpulled I gather dust
And then in roar retaliate
My every hang disguising
Of peaceful hung realizing
That I am theirs to subjugate

My source of life is surging in
Although I'm dead and cold within
I watch all as they sleep
Whether slight or fallen deep
If in count all hope is dire
If I decide to slay their sheep
My every crash destroying
And all below imploring
To not bend low and bid my sweep


The author's comments:
This poem is my most personal poem I've written... it's my negatively bias opinion on ceiling fans.

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khaos17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 2 2013 at 2:36 pm
khaos17 SILVER, Goldthwaite, Texas
8 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to lead yourself before you can lead others.”
“Before you go to judge someone look at the one doing the judging."

i love this one because it is a great poem about ceiling fan if you would not have said that it was about ceiling fans i never would have guessed lol keep 'em coming

on Feb. 19 2013 at 11:49 pm
Happymask PLATINUM, Pride, Louisiana
22 articles 3 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have great faith in fools, self-confidence my friends call it." - Edgar Allan Poe

Thank you! This is one of my earlier poems and one of my personal favorites. Most of my poems I try to make dramatic and many of them "in a dark way." I have more on their way.

on Feb. 19 2013 at 6:58 pm
vaidaspade10 BRONZE, Davenport, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No matter what they say behind your back, they're at a loss because you've locked the knife drawer. Forgiving them now will just leave your back sore." -Qiana Casch

Loved this! I thought it was some extremely deep poem about satanic ways or something. Then I came to realize it was about ceiling fans. I liked the beat to it. It was very dramatic in a dark way. And I love poetry like that. Keep it up. I plan on reading more of your work! :)


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