Loop Poem

June 24, 2012
By jsoda24 BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
jsoda24 BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
“Do not pity the dead Harry. Pity the living, and, above all, those who live without love.” - Albus Dumbledore

You are blind to see
See the love in my heart
Heart that only beats for you
You who doesn't notice me
Me who weeps for you every day
Every day I miss your beautiful eyes
Eyes that sparkle like the moonlight
Moonlight is where I'd like to be
Be with you, forever
Forever I've been waiting
Waiting for you to notice me

The author's comments:
Another assignment for Creative writing class...

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on Nov. 28 2012 at 12:39 pm
A.ranney BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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I love how you used the poetic devices and all of the great sensory details. The images are so well visable made me feel like i was really standing there staring at him.

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