First Kiss MAG

June 28, 2012
By Nicole Flannery BRONZE, Presque Isle, Maine
Nicole Flannery BRONZE, Presque Isle, Maine
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TV blaring on,
we sit on the couch,
bodies stiff,
Oblivious to the voices
"Oh, John, I love you so!"
It spoke, a soap opera.
His hand grasped mine,
the other a remote.
Click, said the TV
Hello, said his eyes,
as they penetrated mine
pupils dilated
Man, I like him so much,
Whoosh, heat rushed to my face,
Bright red, ears warm.
God, I'm hot. (hands caress my cheekbones)
He smiles
Eyes close, waiting, waiting
come on, I can't take it.
Lips touch
First Kiss.

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InkWriter13 said...
on Jun. 30 2012 at 7:03 pm
Great emotion. You described it so well! So hard to put into words, but you did it. Perfect, just like the first kiss. :) Would you read my poem titled the Magic of Love? I would love your take on it.

RyanAD GOLD said...
on Jun. 28 2012 at 9:06 pm
RyanAD GOLD, Grandville, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Any one who ever gave his best, never regretted it."

Nice description. I felt like I was there...even though that would be kinda awkward. lol Keep up the good poems!


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