Love to die

July 25, 2008
By Sharon Saucedo, Lemon Grove, CA

What happens when it falls apart?
No ones their to pick up your heart

The sunlight hurts my eyes
trying to look at you makes me wanna cry
it tears me up inside when you tell your brutal lies
maybe this is mean to die

What happened to our puppy love?
We were on cloud 9, flying away like two doves

Not caring what anyone thought
it was something that couldn't be bought

So beautiful we were
it was something that couldn't be torn

So luminous you are
i give up so lets call it a draw

The author's comments:
this was a poem i had written in 5 mins i had
discoved my hidden talent when i didnt turn in my homeowrk my teacher have given me 10 mins to make a love poem using 5 ceritan words that had to be inculed and i simply sat there thinking for 5mins picked up my pen and stared workin what ever came to my head.

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