Please Be Mine...

May 12, 2012
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I saw you for the first time,
And…..No! It wasn’t love at first sight.
I hated you so much,
Even a glance at you was crime!
Life threw us together,
Much to my disgust
You were always there picking on me,
And I gave you an ironic smile saying…
“Please if you must”

I hated you a lot,
That much I thought was clear,
Then why the hell do I look around now?
And fret, when you are not near?
The feelings grew stronger.
And I was sure I was obsessed,
I started acting weird around you,
And I was sure you thought I was possessed.

Oh! My heart broken into million pieces,
When the thought of me and you,
Was shattered by a true friend,
Who said she liked you too!
Friends are always there when you need them,
So I decided to keep my mouth shut!
I went through all pain,
And realized that she was the one as she had the guts!

You changed your views about me,
And honestly I don’t know why,
You look at me like dirt under your feet,
It really makes me wanna cry!
What did I do to your heart?
Why do you look at me that way?
Its like you’re tearing me apart,
And throwing the little pieces away!

But, today is different!
Now I have made up my mind,
Call me a crazy or a draft
Or anything else of that kind,
Today I have finally found the guts to concede,
And to tell you myself…
“Please ,please wont you be mine?”

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damsel said...
Nov. 20, 2013 at 3:37 am
m glad you all liked it...:)
dark_stars96 said...
Jun. 24, 2012 at 9:42 am
Im absolutely in love with this poem keep it up :)
Firetip This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 9, 2012 at 9:55 am
This is really, really good. I love how you combine all those different emotions and hit the reader with them one at a time with blinding speed. And the last one is just one of hopelessness. 5/5. Hands down.
BekkaGoodwin said...
Jun. 1, 2012 at 10:23 am
No words can describe how much I love this. Amazing, amazing job
Stleemusic said...
May 18, 2012 at 11:18 am

I love this poem and just saying if we were close i'd work hard to make u mine this is a great poem and who ever u wrote it for must be relly special


damsel replied...
May 23, 2012 at 9:17 am
lol..drop d ideas plz....well d poem has nthn 2 do wid me...i hav written it fr a frnd of mine...
Meka100 said...
May 14, 2012 at 2:15 pm

I love this. Great Job! Keep writting, Please!! :)


damsel replied...
May 15, 2012 at 7:58 am
thanks meka...:)
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