Daggers of Eden

May 12, 2012
By nimuengale GOLD, Carbondale, Illinois
nimuengale GOLD, Carbondale, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"GRRRAARRRGGHHH"- Chewbacca


Your knife spins through this air,
piercing what I am just learning;
these jays in the dark cry
as love fails to halt the wrath from churning.
Silver clangs on the wooden floor,
killing what is not breathing;
Death signed its name eons past,
before even this blood was flowing.
The thunder breaks down the doors,
ending what isn’t starting;
no buds began their bloom since the last daffodil died,
where no grave leaves its marking.
The wind soothes the storm,
healing what can’t be unbroken;
the flowers have wilted and love is too late,
for the right words were never spoken.
The knife snaps on the ground,
breaking what chance still stood there;
your walls of mirrors still stand in front of your shallow water eyes,
and there is no place left for flowers to grow here.



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on May. 14 2012 at 1:29 pm
nimuengale GOLD, Carbondale, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"GRRRAARRRGGHHH"- Chewbacca

Thank you :)

Indilove GOLD said...
on May. 14 2012 at 8:25 am
Indilove GOLD, Kenockee, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
No one is your strength or guidance. If life is what you wish to live then do not bind your soul to something unreal. The creater nor the keeper can heal you for it is blind faith that leads you.

Great work! I could really picture this scene in my head you're a great writer!!!!




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