mystery girl

May 10, 2012
By these-roses GOLD, Bristol, Indiana
these-roses GOLD, Bristol, Indiana
14 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
so many books, so little time


that girl
the one sitting
by the window
she doesn't speak
she just stares out
the window
she watches the birds
and the cars as they pass
when she looks up
her sad eyes
showed wisdom
beyond her years
I wonder what
makes her like this
quiet
alone
sad
though
when i crack a joke
I see her smile to
herself
I wonder...
mystery girl



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on May. 18 2012 at 8:29 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

Love it! yes, that was my favorite line as well! :D keep up the great work!!! Welcome to teenink by the way! :)(:

on May. 13 2012 at 3:16 pm
these-roses GOLD, Bristol, Indiana
14 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
so many books, so little time

thanks snowleopard100! i didn't think this is my best but aparently they liked it :)

on May. 13 2012 at 8:39 am
snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
33 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, but I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

I love the line "showed wisdom/beyond her years"; other than that, it was a very straightforward poem, which, to me isn't necessarily a bad thing due to your great use of imagery and imagination. Nice!!!!


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