mystery girl

May 10, 2012
that girl
the one sitting
by the window
she doesn't speak
she just stares out
the window
she watches the birds
and the cars as they pass
when she looks up
her sad eyes
showed wisdom
beyond her years
I wonder what
makes her like this
quiet
alone
sad
though
when i crack a joke
I see her smile to
herself
I wonder...
mystery girl





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snowleopard100 said...
May 13, 2012 at 8:39 am
I love the line "showed wisdom/beyond her years"; other than that, it was a very straightforward poem, which, to me isn't necessarily a bad thing due to your great use of imagery and imagination. Nice!!!!
 
these-roses replied...
May 13, 2012 at 3:16 pm
thanks snowleopard100! i didn't think this is my best but aparently they liked it :)
 
Free.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 18, 2012 at 8:29 pm
Love it! yes, that was my favorite line as well! :D keep up the great work!!! Welcome to teenink by the way! :)(:
 
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