Bruises

May 10, 2012
Bruises,
black, blue, purple,
large, small.
So many varieties.
Each one tells a different story.
Some are clumsy falls,
others angry lashes.
my favorite still,
are the ones from a great practice.
They are from risky dives,
nasty trips,
and coaches mistakes.
Each one holds a memory.
Bruises,
life.





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DanielM said...
May 15, 2012 at 2:06 pm
I liked your poem. Maybe the only thing i would suggest is maybe go in depth in some of the stanzas. Other than that i really liked it. Great Job!!!
 
TaylerBrooke replied...
May 17, 2012 at 5:01 pm
thanks! i really appreciate your comment :) i'll definitely take it into consideration for future works
 
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