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Excuse Me.....

May 9, 2012
By DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

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Excuse me
I’ve got something to say
And when I’m done
I Promise you
You’ll be happy that you stayed

This is just a little something
I wrote only for you
And we’ve been friends for so long now
It’s time that I tell you this

Before I’ll even tell you this
It’ll be over, said and done
So why don’t we seize the moment; freeze it and own it.
Why don’t we begin?

© Nicole D., Palm Harbor, FL

The author's comments:
Uh, i'm not really into writing poems but i decided to try something new so here's my first poem that i've ever written.
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TypisLingua BRONZE said...
on May. 12 2012 at 2:41 pm
TypisLingua BRONZE, LiIttleton, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky's the limit when they're are footprints on the moon.

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I like it a lot. The rhyme scheme is pretty solid, and so is the rhythm. Nice
TypisLingua BRONZE said...
on May. 12 2012 at 2:41 pm
TypisLingua BRONZE, LiIttleton, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky's the limit when they're are footprints on the moon.

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I like it a lot. The rhyme scheme is pretty solid, and so is the rhythm. Nice
mjunior SILVER said...
on May. 12 2012 at 11:39 am
mjunior SILVER, Hacienda Heights, California
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. 5 It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. 6 Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. 7 It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres.

8 Love never fails. But where there are prophecies, they will cease; where there are tongues, they will be stilled; where there is knowledge, it will pass away.

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Its a good start for your first time!!!
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on May. 11 2012 at 4:33 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

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Nice, I like the end :)