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Excuse Me.....

Excuse me
I’ve got something to say
And when I’m done
I Promise you
You’ll be happy that you stayed

This is just a little something
I wrote only for you
And we’ve been friends for so long now
It’s time that I tell you this

Before I’ll even tell you this
It’ll be over, said and done
So why don’t we seize the moment; freeze it and own it.
Why don’t we begin?




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TypisLingua said...
May 12, 2012 at 2:41 pm:
I like it a lot. The rhyme scheme is pretty solid, and so is the rhythm. Nice
 
DanielM replied...
May 14, 2012 at 6:00 pm :
thank you...
 
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mjunior said...
May 12, 2012 at 11:39 am:
Its a good start for your first time!!!
 
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IamtheshyStargirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 11, 2012 at 4:33 pm:
Nice, I like the end :)
 
EmmyCherry replied...
May 17, 2012 at 2:07 pm :
Agreed. An open-ended question is definitely a great ending to a poem :).
 
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