When i was a real girl

May 2, 2012
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
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love comes and goes,
just like the watter flows


when i was a real girl, i was so happy, i didn't feel crappy,
when i was a real girl,
I was cute,
but now i'm not cute,
when i was a real girl,
I didn't cry my-self to sleep at night,
and i wasn't filled with so much fright,
when i was a real girl,
i didn't have these scares,
i could see the stars,
but now thats all over,
because i'm no longer a real girl.



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on Oct. 8 2014 at 10:31 am
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
love comes and goes,
just like the watter flows

thank you very much

on Dec. 7 2012 at 11:53 am
CariePierce BRONZE, Lancaster, Pennsylvania
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"Imagination rules the world." -Napoleon Bonaparte

Interesting concept. Maybe use some more synonyms..? And try to ommit unintentional rhyming, it gives the reader pause. However, I do believe that you have potential!


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