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When i was a real girl

when i was a real girl, i was so happy, i didn't feel crappy,
when i was a real girl,
I was cute,
but now i'm not cute,
when i was a real girl,
I didn't cry my-self to sleep at night,
and i wasn't filled with so much fright,
when i was a real girl,
i didn't have these scares,
i could see the stars,
but now thats all over,
because i'm no longer a real girl.



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The_Introspect_Ninja said...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 11:53 am:
Interesting concept. Maybe use some more synonyms..? And try to ommit unintentional rhyming, it gives the reader pause. However, I do believe that you have potential!
 
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