He feels the love

April 27, 2012
By Ashley Searcy BRONZE, Grandville, Michigan
Ashley Searcy BRONZE, Grandville, Michigan
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I'd walk a mile for her
big brown eyes.
To see them everyday
of my life. To gaze
in those eyes
like everyone is gone.

I'd walk a mile for her
huge smile. That
shines so bright.
The smile that keeps
my love going all day
and all night.

But I wouldn't walk
at all for her big fat
noise that blocks those
beautiful eyes.
Which makes that smile
crooked sometimes.


The author's comments:
This piece talks about how somethings are very good and somethings need to change.

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