Perfection

April 27, 2012
By thefantasticChaney BRONZE, Wyoming, Michigan
thefantasticChaney BRONZE, Wyoming, Michigan
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Trapped.
Suffocating under the pressure.
It's supposed to feel
light, freeing, perfect.
But the weight crashes in.
Breathing is harder on the underside
but the surface is flawless.
Bubbles of hope dance,
but will it be enough?



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This is writing has been the doorway to my own existence, it's exactly what I am experiencing. It was absolutly life changing, keep on writing.




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