The Break-Up Poem

July 22, 2008
Life isn't fair,
even in luv,
we're not there.
When u were n luv,
what happened to u?
u were all smiles,
all laughs.
i luved it,
i felt so happy.
but u took it all away,
and threw it
into another girls arms.
when u w/ me,
u were w/ her.
u really hurt me,
'cause i really liked u.
i feel strange,
'cause we never went out.
so good-bye,
my old friend.
i can't ever forget
this pain.
i dont wanna hear,
ure excuses.
i dont want to say
that i luv u,
i dont want to say
that i dont luv u
any more,
but i do.
i still luv you.
but i still turn my back,
never to look again.

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Rochel said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 4:38 pm
oh my =D this is a great poem I really like it =D I als like the discription to it. thats so me =D well keep it up =D
charlesandreno This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 3:03 pm
Thats a really good poem!
brittanyroxursox replied...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 6:15 am
omg reno! i love uuuuuuuuu
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