The Break-Up Poem

July 22, 2008
By brittanyroxursox SILVER, Clemmons, North Carolina
brittanyroxursox SILVER, Clemmons, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
jerkks are jerkks, forever and always

Life isn't fair,
even in luv,
we're not there.
When u were n luv,
what happened to u?
u were all smiles,
all laughs.
i luved it,
i felt so happy.
but u took it all away,
and threw it
into another girls arms.
when u w/ me,
u were w/ her.
u really hurt me,
'cause i really liked u.
i feel strange,
'cause we never went out.
so good-bye,
my old friend.
i can't ever forget
this pain.
i dont wanna hear,
ure excuses.
i dont want to say
that i luv u,
i dont want to say
that i dont luv u
any more,
but i do.
i still luv you.
but i still turn my back,
never to look again.

The author's comments:
I love to write short stories, but now I am more interested in poetry. My poems come to me when the realization of something that happened to me hits me.

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This article has 3 comments.

Rochel GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 4:38 pm
Rochel GOLD, Westminster, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Everyone is going to hurt you, Sooner or later you'll have to decide who's worth going through the pain".

oh my =D this is a great poem I really like it =D I als like the discription to it. thats so me =D well keep it up =D

on Nov. 10 2009 at 6:15 am
omg reno! i love uuuuuuuuu

Beamer SILVER said...
on Nov. 9 2009 at 3:03 pm
Beamer SILVER, Clemmons, North Carolina
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Thats a really good poem!


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