What About Love?

March 30, 2012
By Krystie1250 BRONZE, Neosho, Missouri
Krystie1250 BRONZE, Neosho, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
To accomplish great things, we must dream as well as act.
Anatole France (1844 - 1924)
Creativity is the residue of wasted time.
Einstien
You can't fly when something is holding you down.
(I'm not sure who said this first)


He looked at me,
And said the simple words,
"I cant be with you anymore."
As he walked away,
My heart was sore.
I saw him again,
with his new girlfriend,
a girl I'd seen before.
"Why'd you do this?"
I asked her.
She had been my friend.
She looked at me,
with disdain,
and said,
"Don't talk to me again."
As they left,
I yelled at them,
and now I wish I hadn't.
Because now I have,
someone else to love,
and my heart won't be broken again.


The author's comments:
I hope that people will understand that you'll have more than one person in your life to love.

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on May. 21 2012 at 3:33 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I know exactly how this feels and what it feels like to dump someone for someone else... trust me it's not easy. I love this poem and how you didn't try to steal him back and it wasn't angry or upsetting. It was just... mellow. I love it, hope you keep writing :))

on Apr. 24 2012 at 3:22 pm
Krystie1250 BRONZE, Neosho, Missouri
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
To accomplish great things, we must dream as well as act.
Anatole France (1844 - 1924)
Creativity is the residue of wasted time.
Einstien
You can't fly when something is holding you down.
(I'm not sure who said this first)

Thanks guys!!!  I'm really glad you liked it!!!!  I'm working on a story and i should have it posted soon.  Probably in the novels section.

DanielM. said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 6:52 pm
I really enjoyed your poem. Great Job. And it important to realize that your first crush wont be your only first crush. And that you need more people to be around you other than one person. Great Message!

on Apr. 18 2012 at 6:43 pm
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.

I think it's important to understand that your first relationship won't be your last--your first group of friends won't either! Many people are so torn when a relationship ends, they put up walls and it eventually prevents another. Well written poem indeed!

on Apr. 2 2012 at 8:37 pm
xflighty_firex BRONZE, Clarity, Other
3 articles 1 photo 6 comments
Pretty good! Kinda' short, but then again I'm not to judge. My poems are like, 10 lines on a good day! Keep writing!




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